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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Buffy having to see that, I really felt for her - I really did - very convincing writing. And so typical that Riley would've waited until the last moment to help! Wouldn't want to be him now Buffy's on the warpath! I like the way Willow and the rest of the Slayers all helped and it's a shame about Angel. But what the heck has happened to Spik Can Can't wait to find out so don't take too long to update, please. tty tty please? :)
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great start to the story. Mad props for getting to the smut before you even find Spike! Not sure about the big words that Buffy's using, it just doesn't sound "in character" to me, but the story is going well and I'm eager to read more. :)
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I love reunion stories, and I'd say you're
definitely in NC-17 territory. Keep writing, you're doing
a good job.
definitely in NC-17 territory. Keep writing, you're doing
a good job.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous, absolutely fabulous! Love the interaction een een Spike and Buffy - I think you've really captured how they'd both be feeling about the 'bathroom' issue and I liked the way you had them forgive each other for it. Great love scene as well - I'd never have guessed that was your first attempt. Very steamy but also very sweet. I'm dying to know what's on the tape even more now! Hope you update soon :)
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Diapoint? way way!!! Not in the very least!! It was very very very good!!!!! Just perfect!!! I can not WAIT for more now that aff is running again!!!
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You captured everything perfectly, and for your first attempt at a love scene - WOW!!! Keep at it you have some real talent, and I read other people's work for a living. This is one of the best Fanfics I've ever read.
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters (read 2) I didn't get an opportunity to review on the journal because I had like 20 panes open.... but I did get to here. Like my name?
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*HUG* Awesome job so amazing so wonderfully done! I don't think I've EVER read anyone show the reality that she loves Spike set in better than you and I have been reading ficts here for a long time!!! It was perfection!!! I can not WAIT for your next chapter. No need to rush to the lovins too fast. Let it happen as the story unfolds to you. I have faith that it'll all come together wonderfully!!!