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for The Journal of Buffy Summers

by Vette

person Katrina
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can't stop there! No fair! Dying to know what's in the trunk and in Angel's letter. Nice lead up to the next chapter that's definitely made me want to read more :)
person Katrina
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, great update! Can't wait to hear what's in the letter and I hope she does find something from Spike too, that'd be nice :) It was a surprise that she took Harmony with her but I enjoyed some of the things she came out with while under hypnosis, LOL! Can't wait for the next chappie :)
person Megan
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, nice addition. I feel like Im on the edge waiting to see where Spike really is! Also, glad you saved Harmony. She is annoying but strangely loyal and pathetic in her neediness. I think she will be a great addition, she never had the killing thing going on anyway. Never seemed to be taken over by a on hon hardly at all.
person Megan
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I thought chapter 6 was beautiful in its depiction of resolutions and regrets of Buffy and Spike's last 'alone' moments together before facing the first. I don't ususally like to read stories about that night, but this time I didn't mind. Well done. I think each of your chapters has been improving, and I am looking forward to seeing what she finds has happened to the two vamps. If you still need a Beta give me a note.
person Megan
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry!
person jane
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story lots of emotion but not enough Spuffy. More please.
person Katrina
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist on having the Initiative watching Buffy, Angel and Spike for years. You worked it out nicely and I can't wait to see where you're going to take this. Didn't expect the mystery person to be Harmony and trust her to tell Buffy about her and Spike's little...'nooner'. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person LadyLiz
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good chapter!! Sure there was a lot to get through but the little fight between Harm and Buffy kept it from being information overload. THe apple thing Willow did, PRICELESS!! I can't wait to find out how th' boys are, hope they're ok!! *crosses fingers* And I've given you five stars like every time I read a chapter, and sometimes just because I don't have anything else to do, and you deserve every one of them!!! Hope that's reflected soon!!
person txjmfan
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very emotional chapter. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
person txjmfan
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Almost forgot...I GAVE YOU FIVE STARS!!!!!!!!