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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellently written. You captured their thoughts and emotions really well, at least in the first few chapters.
While in the latter ones Angelus stayed int he same vein, with Willow the sudden change to accepting him and wanting him just didn't feel right. While I liked her slow anger at how everyone in her life had treated her, her turning to accetp Angelus didn't make sence, he would still be right up their, formost in her hatred. Not only for what he had just done to her, but I think also because he had been the catalyst that had brought her to this realization of herself and her life.
I would really like to have seen where this story had have gone if you didn't decide to make it a Willow/Angelus shipper, but continued her on in the logical path her thoughts and emotions would have taken her. Perhaps when she rebuffs him with her insane laughter and tears he decides to leave her shattered and broken for the slayer to find and care for, a care Willow would not want to accept after her revalations. We would get to see her try to rebuild herself into someone she is able to live with inside herself.
Still despite my oppinions it was a very well written story and the jumping back and forth between each of their thoughts and feelings on each action that Angelus took was nicely done.
Power to your muses.
Chris
While in the latter ones Angelus stayed int he same vein, with Willow the sudden change to accepting him and wanting him just didn't feel right. While I liked her slow anger at how everyone in her life had treated her, her turning to accetp Angelus didn't make sence, he would still be right up their, formost in her hatred. Not only for what he had just done to her, but I think also because he had been the catalyst that had brought her to this realization of herself and her life.
I would really like to have seen where this story had have gone if you didn't decide to make it a Willow/Angelus shipper, but continued her on in the logical path her thoughts and emotions would have taken her. Perhaps when she rebuffs him with her insane laughter and tears he decides to leave her shattered and broken for the slayer to find and care for, a care Willow would not want to accept after her revalations. We would get to see her try to rebuild herself into someone she is able to live with inside herself.
Still despite my oppinions it was a very well written story and the jumping back and forth between each of their thoughts and feelings on each action that Angelus took was nicely done.
Power to your muses.
Chris
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was fun! Like to see Willow getting some attention even though it was rotten difficult to begin with. Off to find the sequel now.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I hope that you write a sequel to tell us what happens. ^_^ I'd love to live my life with Angelus! Hehe!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. You are a very good writer. Are you going to do a continuation to this story as to what happens after everyone finds out where Willow is? I think it would be a good idea.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with teehee32. I have been following this story and would like to see what would happen to the pair next. How they would interact with the Scoobies. Good writing.
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the reasons you're giving for Willow's behavior. They make so much sense.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Willow but this is very intriguing material. I love Angelus fics.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like Angelus' plan. Sounds good!