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for Twisted Destinies

by rosy4president

person Lavonya
schedule May 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SO DAMN MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE I'm begging you to write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ladymafloy45
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I know you haven't updated in a long time but I hope you will write on this story some more. You are doing a great job!
person Sami
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay it's great but the errors are horrible and done in such a manner that i have to wonder whether you even checked for them. This is the 10th story i read from this website and all of them, ALL of them had stupid errors, GRAMMATICAL errors that have given me a migraine by the end of the chapters. Please stop with those, they completely destroy the stories for me.I really like this one that's why i'm putting out a comment. The plot is good so far and the dialogue is captivating. Keep writing.
person astria
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Tap foot impatiently* More chapters pppppllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee?????????????? I totaly love this fic and wanna see were its going.
person ASTRIA
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*CLAPS* MORE PLEASE! I LIKE IT AND WANNA SEE SOME FUN ANGELUS XANDER HAPPINESS.......DOSENT NECESARILY GOT TO BE SEX JUST SOME DISCUSTINGLY CUTE REALIZATIONS OF LOVEY OR LUSTY TYPE FEELINGS.........ON SHORT I WANT EVERYONE HAPPY! BUT YOU ARE THE AUTHR AND IM NOT TRYING TO TELL YOU WHAT TO WRITE THIS IS JUST HOW I CAN GET. IT JUST MEANS I LIKE YOUR STORY LOTS AND WANNA SEE MORE!

person Smilie
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Helloooooooooo Please Update
Smilie
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you got his name wrong. It's Angelus, not Angelous. overall, good story, but the typo is taking away from it....*unless I missed something*
person hyakuhei
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Urg... wicked. I can't wait to see where you go from here.
person hyakuhei
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.