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by Green

person pureevil230
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was hot! write more! Write the next part or something...wat's her training going to be? will she be a dom to buffy? Keep up the awesome hot work!
person Doug
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, boy. Maybe see a little of Buffy or Faiths' POV. A little question from Buffy to Dawn about how she knew how to answer Faith could lead to confessing having heard them earlier some other time when they were playing. I could see this being in season 3? But lets be fair, if somebody makes a mistake, then there should be a penalty. And I could just as easily see Dawn topping both of them for a scene or two as a reward for being VERY good at her lessons, as well as just seeing Faith being a bottom to Buffy. Just because. I'm torn about having others jump in, just for now leave it these 3. Thanks for this.
person Cherry
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT!