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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Saw the summary (and title) and thought "oh great. another Buffy as nanny story." Despite that, I decided to read the first paragraph. Boy, am I glad I did!!! Your story is so well written and well told, and you set up the romance so well, it did not seem contrived or rushed. I can't wait to read more of this, to see where you are going to take us. I'd like to know if you've written anything else, because I'd love to read it!!! Great story. Please continue...
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet and sexy. I love what you have so far. James is such a cutie and I love his interaction with Buffy. Looking forward to William's "tutelage" of Buffy. ;)
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! You should distribute this story to other sites like Sinister Attraction, Vampire Kiss, Spuffy Archives and Blondie Bear! Respect for Spike. That way, you would have more reviews and inspiration to write more! Hmm I'm curious.. exactly how old are William and Buffy?
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I love this story! It's so good and it's a good pace...please keep going!!
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For a first time fict, I am VERY impressed! I absolutely adore James (btw, VERY cute and clever!) and the sparking chemistry between Buffy and William. LOL! I about died when she was talking in her sleep. The poor guy!! Please, keep up the good work. I'm really looking forward to more!
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story so far is really great, please update soon!
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Is this really your 1st story? Love William, love James and love Cook - how orignal and funny. More please!