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for Come with Me

by ScarletIbis

person annielaurie
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like it, but I was a little confused the way it jumped
back and forth in time. And sometimes the song lyrics
bled into the story. They need more separation between.
But, overall, very good.
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! Ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spike needs to come back ASAP preferably afttakitaking Harmony on the top of the Eiffel Tower

Love it but want more!!!