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for Crawling Towards Ecstasy

by EdenGardenOf

person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THAT'S IT?! HOW CAN YOU DO THAT?!

really ending it like that what were you thinking? i want more drama, more sadness, seperation, lots of tears and heartbreaking moments of an impossible love, COME ON i know you can do it i've seen you do it before...

so plz don't leave it like this
person Dylan
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, are you going to continue with this? I for one would like you to.
person lemons
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is great! I love how you've written faith here, shes best when she's dark and angsty in my opinion. You should definately keep goign here. You're a fabulous writer!
person Carla
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd definitely be interested in reading a continuation of this story. Continue, please!
person poet
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No! that cant be the end! this fic is beggign to be continued... oh no wait, thats just me... Yeah! I would love to see where you go with this.
person Queen Zulu
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End? Not hardly, my friend, not hardly. See, you write well. Capitalize all the proper names and you'd really have something going. Nice voice for Faith, and I love the bit of dialogue, "You betrayed me--" "By going to the Mayor?" "With Xander." Cause I never thought about it like that before, and it's all like, ooh, something new. Plus, you realize, the story's not over. I don't know what happens next, but that was a stop, not an ending. So, continue, yeah?
person Shane
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End? END? Like you have to ask? I want more! this, like all your stories, was great. I love how you jsut climb inside faith's head and make yourself comfortable. You do great with her point of view. Now back to writing! you gotta continue this!