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Freakin unbelievable! ELR you are a master I swear. You actually put me in that forest with Faith, i swear the way you put together words and imagery is just stunning! And you made me want to punch Giles in the face for ending that dream! haha! Can't wait to see where this is goign... no really... hurry up! or take you're time whatever I jsut knwo it'll be fantastic

So good to see this updated! and another amazing chapter. I l the the shared dream (hated when it ended) I always thought that was a part of the show that the writers could have explored more, but who needs them when you're here to do it! Can't wait to see the next part.

Oh you ARE good. I think the dream is an interesting twist. And i can totally see how you're filtering out the flashbacks and puttign in more of the pre. Th. This is really incredeble stuff here, Hope to see much much more of it too!

Hmm, I like. (Hey, how could I not, when I'm mentioned in the author notes?) Have I mentioned your line-by-line writing's really good? Also, that bit about "half the cast of Bambi" had me guffawing. Good set up. Interested to see where it's going. Grin.

Hey, thought I'd drop by and give you a little update!love. I'm really enjoying the idea of Buffy knowing about Faith's past before she arrives, and how that might change their history together. If I could give you a suggestion, it would be that you don't need flashbacks. Usually, the story flows just fine in chronological order...or so I've found. I liked the part where Willow suggests that she's Faith's friend, and Buffy doesn't believe her. I wonder if Buffy considers herself to be Faith's friend. That could be interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter!

ah, see the thing is, i did this as a one off piece, right? so it was, mainly, all flashbacks. with the second part (even though there wasn't supposed to be one, damn you lot and your persuasive powers!), i didn't put in as many flashbacks, and added more story, and this part there was just the one flashbacks. so basicall'm 'm filtering out the flashbacks to bring it to cronological (prolly spelt wrong, i dun care), so i can continue without having to base it on a flashback of some sort. cause if i'd just gone right from flashbacky ficness, to cronological ficness, it would have totally broken up the flow of the whole fecking thing. and i hate when that happens.

so m'dear, there's a good reason for the flashbacks, but worry not! they won't be presant in the next part. there is a method to my madness, i assure you. i'm not *just* a nutjob you know..

and i know i used the word 'flashback' far, *far* too many times in that first paragraph. but watch me care. it's 10 to 4 in the am..

I'm liking the original spin on this story. It's certainly gonna keep me coming back for more.

YES! to be continued! YESS!! this fic is so amazing seriously you are really on to some thing here. I cant wait for some Buffy Faith interaction to see how you would change some of those scenes. This is really fuckin amazing. you have to write more!

Can't wait to read the next chapter, keep it coming!

OH my GAWD! that was so good. Continue? Hell yeah! you've got serious skills and i got to have more! this story has such potential! wrtie more soon?