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for After the End Has Come and Gone

by addielogan

person Kat
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still reading... though if the nasty Angel stuff doesn't get fixed I may stop lol. Just when you think Buffy is ready to act mature about a relationship. Anyways, good writing and I really really really REALLY hope that she'll tell Angel the truth next chapter :)
person Jerrica
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is really intriguing and very well written, and I can't wait to see more of it.

Buffy irritates me to no end, Angel is being a jerk (who's obviously got it out for Spike) and Wim ism is far too accepting. Even with all the times he's been pissed off by Buffy's behaviour, I would've been about 100 times more angry. She seems to think it's okay for her to ask (read 'demand') Spike/William to do one thing after another for her, but never does anything for him. She can't even tell Angel to fuck off, or tell the truth about her and William, even though she has to know it would set his (William's) mind at ease.

I predict that Angel will engage in a lot of Spike-bashing in coming chapters, and that Buffy won't do a thing to protect the man she 'loves', at least not until one of her friends gives her a swift kick to the rear. I also predict that Dawn will be William's grand champion, going head-to-head with Angel on his behalf.

Please up soo soon!
person LadyLiz
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*waves hand* I'm still reading!!! Don't stop now!! William need tnallnally get his revenge and punch Angelighlights out!!!!
person Amanda
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im reading it... :) its a really good story too, i just reead the whole thing so far, and i love it.
person Tamara Burks
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still reading, still reading (bouncing in chair) ,Now come on andte ste some more!
person pattyanne
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I"M still reading it. I think it's great.
person Peta
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that she put her foot in it again, really, she just isn't capeable of putting Spike first. A real shame, but every action throughout this story has been selfish Buffy and it would have been horrible for him to forgive her seven years of crap so quickly. I still love this story, but definitely need quicker updates...do you need a Beta? I'm available...even if you need a second...for Bad Medicine?
person scbydu
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi I was just able to get on to check to see if you've updated and I see that you haven't yet. Please don't tell me that you aren't writing this anymore. I really really enjoy it. I'm not able to get online much anymore cuz of classes but I do still try heckheck into the fanfics that are my faves. Please let me know if you are continuing this story. Thanks, Faith
person Sarah
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please ad more to this story!
person Constance
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that you are doing a great job. I haven't been able to stop reading because all of your chapters were so interesting. You are going along the lines that most of my friends and I wanted the shows tolow low and it is exciting to see it told in such an entertaining way. Please carry on I think you are writing an excellent piece.