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I would really really (and did I happen to mention really?)love to see you continue this story, it is so good... and I want to know if they rescue Cordy and rip Angel a new one!

Pretty please with chocolate covered Spander?

I love this story. I want to see Spike giving self defense lessons to Xander, Tara, Dawn and Fred. I think Giles finally sees that he's actually hurt them by not doing it himself and I think it would be great if he stood up to Buffy, Willow, Riley and Angel and helped Spike do it.

love it looking forward to more =)

wow! i can't believe this hasn't updated in over a year! I love the story and the spin you have put on Xander. i really want to see where all the demon drama and initative stuff goes... well i will keep and eye out and hope you update soon. love your stuff!

{snicker} This is so funny in spots. I loved "Guerrilla Warfare for Dummies" and actually did a search for it so I could read the entire list (There's a Gundam Wing story with the list with annotations that's hysterical). Of course this paragraph:

She [Fred] moved off with Spike, the two of them planning mayhem and destruction. Xander looked at Giles and Tara. They both had the same look of shocked horror that he kinda figured was on his face. “My god. I really hope the two of them never try to take over the world. They’d win.”

got an even bigger laugh. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm

any possibility of an update or have yyou dropped this?

I would like to humbly add my request for an update to this story to the others that have been no doubt posted in the previous reviews. I am curious to see if raiding this facility can make Buffy see what a jerk Riley is. (Why do I see a 8 year old nekodemon screaming "Get away from me you kitten-killer wannabee" and slapping Riley and Buffy upside both their faces?) And the promised chewing out of both Angel and the other males in his crew by Cordelia and Fred, no doubt with a side of Xander and Spike either hiding in utter terror or egging them on sounds like a lot of fun. ;)

Soooooooo, why aren't you updating such a magnific story? I've been reading lately most of your work and I admit it is really good, excellent. Your writing style is acute and had the perfect rythm for the actions, and the way you describe feelings and situations is perfect. I also like the way you write about Xander and Spike, not only sex, but also a deeper conexion between the two, something that lacks in a lot of other fics.

I hope that, tough you wrote on this fic a long time ago, you decide against leave it here. Such an interesting story deserves an end.

Venus

I was just wondering if you had plans to update this story any time soon. I know you've been busy with alot of other stories (thank you for that), but this story is a favorite of mine, and I'd really enjoy seeing where this tale goes next.

Thanks.

-Sharia-

This is such a cool story! I am in love with it! I'm kinda new to the site, and I checked out this story, and I'm way happy with it! Please update soon, I need more Riley bashing; it makes me happy!