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by Leia

person drowned_star
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooOooOo i like where this is going...but that was such a big tease "she sort of demanded it" WHY?! i wanna know, write more and i will read more. Excellent writing!
person Dylan
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you got my attention. Now spill.... :o)
person Wicked
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, ken has money, that one made me chuckle. Keep it coming, it's good!
person Blackie
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So am I, as well.
next chapter, when you can...
person Carla
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, it's a little vague but it's got me intrigued. I hope you continue to update often!