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for lovers dance

by shell

person Anon
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please.
person Burnz
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O'll'll bite. Interesting story.
person Alicia
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are such a tease :-). I loved chapter 4- Spike is so hot in this fic- well he's hot always- well anyway I can't wait for the update- your ending for the chappy was perfect with her calling him William. We need Spuffy action soon!!!!!! :-)
person Emma
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start, that was very hot! I wonder how this story's gonna end... cough. Well, keep it going, I'd love to see more of it!
person Alicia
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So very hot! One of the best smutty dance scenes I have ever read in a fic. I love it! Please update soon- this iing ing to be a great fic!!!!!!
person tina
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lovin' it...more please x
person Tigger
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!
person Karen
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. Please update soon!!
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but you need a beta to catch your punctuation errors.
person Burnz
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. It will be good to find out why Spike is running hot and cold though. I look forward to your updates.

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