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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it... interested in how joyce and giles will find out.
and what about them... i mean spike has to re attend school sometime... and buffy's dancin t... ... can't wait...update soon plz!
and what about them... i mean spike has to re attend school sometime... and buffy's dancin t... ... can't wait...update soon plz!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I started to read Lovers walk yesterday. Now I'm at chapter 12, so I can't really give the review about the whole story. So far I have really liked the idea. I have couple of suggestions. You don't have to listen to them or do as I say. It's nothing personal just my opinion.
I think the story would be easier to read if the sentences were little shorter. If you'd cut some sentences and so on, it would be easier cle clearer to read.
I really like the idea of the story. I hope that in future the dancing comes to story also. I would love to read more about Buffys dancing lessons. Also because the name of the story is Lovers dance, I really hope that they would dance. It would be fun to read Buffy trying to teach Spike to dance.
But as I said earlier, those are just my thoughts.
I started to read Lovers walk yesterday. Now I'm at chapter 12, so I can't really give the review about the whole story. So far I have really liked the idea. I have couple of suggestions. You don't have to listen to them or do as I say. It's nothing personal just my opinion.
I think the story would be easier to read if the sentences were little shorter. If you'd cut some sentences and so on, it would be easier cle clearer to read.
I really like the idea of the story. I hope that in future the dancing comes to story also. I would love to read more about Buffys dancing lessons. Also because the name of the story is Lovers dance, I really hope that they would dance. It would be fun to read Buffy trying to teach Spike to dance.
But as I said earlier, those are just my thoughts.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL
They didn't follow them upstairs and break up the fight, and they didn't hear her scream Spike's name......man they are blind and deaf or the house was in a big case of denial......I was worried Buffy wasn't going to like the caveman, "Me man, you my woman" routine....but I have to say he does have a great way to make a woman forget about that......OH YEAH!
And Parker.....man, I hope you went to the bathroom to wipe...LOL
Kimber
more please soon....LOL
They didn't follow them upstairs and break up the fight, and they didn't hear her scream Spike's name......man they are blind and deaf or the house was in a big case of denial......I was worried Buffy wasn't going to like the caveman, "Me man, you my woman" routine....but I have to say he does have a great way to make a woman forget about that......OH YEAH!
And Parker.....man, I hope you went to the bathroom to wipe...LOL
Kimber
more please soon....LOL
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so addicted that Im seriously thinkin about gettin help!
Please update soon...
Please update soon...
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapters.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh them sneaky kids.......
I wonder who Joyce has invited to the party to play Romeo to her daugther's Juliet....LOL! How dare the parents think they can make whoopie after talking about separating their children.....bad parents bad parents....I think they should over hear their loved ones talk about how uncomfortable it makes them being together (even if oesnoesn't) and talk about since they can't be together itld hld hurt to much for their parents to be a couple and talk about breaking them up.......let them adults see how it feels....LOL
Kimber
I wonder who Joyce has invited to the party to play Romeo to her daugther's Juliet....LOL! How dare the parents think they can make whoopie after talking about separating their children.....bad parents bad parents....I think they should over hear their loved ones talk about how uncomfortable it makes them being together (even if oesnoesn't) and talk about since they can't be together itld hld hurt to much for their parents to be a couple and talk about breaking them up.......let them adults see how it feels....LOL
Kimber
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you do know I hate you for the way you ended ch 17, right?!?!?!?!??!
MAN, I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
I'd also like to say that I loved the angsty part after he told her he loved her.
Cause a little angst always spices up a story.
I'd love to see a little bit jealousy now and then. Just because possessive/jealous Spike's a HUGE turn on. hehe
Keep goin!
sC
MAN, I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
I'd also like to say that I loved the angsty part after he told her he loved her.
Cause a little angst always spices up a story.
I'd love to see a little bit jealousy now and then. Just because possessive/jealous Spike's a HUGE turn on. hehe
Keep goin!
sC
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Glad they made up.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. Interested to see what Buffy's reaction to his "slip" will be.
Chris
Chris
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, more please.