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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please.
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to read an update! it was great!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww she tried to surprise him and he's all drunk, lol! can't wait for more!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She is just evil, just like you.....LOL, great little drunken and here's the surprise chapter.......
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the plot, but the sentences are really long, and make it hard to follow the story. otherwise, good job!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tell me again why he has to leave now, why can't their schools start around the same time, Bad dancing school being such pain in the asses holding out like this......bad bad bad....bad I say. How can he promise he will see her every weekend, she might end up in NYC and he won't see her except on school breaks, sniff sniff.....make it better you....LOL
Kimber
Kimber
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It seemed alright to me, emotion wise. And I'd love more!
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice clean up and morning after toast burning sex........LOL with the Joyce blushing.
Kimber
Kimber
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. You're writing has progressively improved the further into the story you've gone.