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for Fleeting

by EdenGardenOf

person Cat
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Your writing is very good. It reminds me of the writing style in my fave novel "the dogs of babel". Anyway, not the point. The point is I really like this fic and I hope you continue with it soon!
person Cat
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh you DID continue. Sorry it didn't show up on my computer for some reason (grrr) Anway, ignore the previous review. I haven't finished reading all 18 chapters yet but it said "closed until further notice" because people haven't reviewed. But I bet I will want you to continue after that. (I started reading this fic because I was reading your newest one and thought your writing was amazing so I would check out your other stuff. So far it is just as good. So..I'll let you know later on )
person Cat
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good. Why did nobody review it? That is mighty weird. Anyway I know you said you weren't goint to continue, and that makes me very sad =(. But it is still a good fic anyway and maybe someday you will continue it. I wouealleally like that. Until then, I will be reading your new fic!
person Eric
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just started reading but i hate cliffhangers so i only read the first chapter as not to get too interested in the story before it ends =( but its a good fic and if you keep writing it ill keep reading it
it realy is a good fic dont loose faith (no pun...) you have to keep going it may not look like it but there are those of us that realy look forward to when the fics we are reading are updated so pl dont stop and leave me hangin on such a good fic
person frog, green,slippy
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pity you stopped, I always liked back and forth fics when they were well done. Especially when they had a good plot and some actual ideas. Sad to see a good story end up in the obituaries. Hope you change your mind...
person alex
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this story. you cant just stop writing i mean i know i have been a very bad reviewer ,but i really love this story you have gracefully aloud is bad reviewers read. i'm sorry i havent reviewed your stories ,but i am telling you please update because i wanna find out what happens.
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DO NOT stop updating....

Love this story, and want to see where it is going...please!!!
person Ashley
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE!! lol
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! what the *hell* are you doing to me??!!! UP-DATE!! NOW!!!
PLEASE!!!!????
person Deacon
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'love it'