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for War For Freedom

by Toby7

person king for a day
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SELENCE DOESN'T GRIN
enough said
person Jayn
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
From what I seen, you have some GREAT ideas, but you're not motivated to finish them. PLEASE update soon! I really want to read more!
person IciaJ
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! More please! ^_^
person rayne
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sounds like an interesting story to develop!
keep it coming!

~r.
person Catlin
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I think that is an GREAT START!!! it was really good and i like where it was going i would love if u could continue it!!!
person BlackCat9
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright here is the "constructive criticsism" of the review. I know you said that some of the character swould be slighty out of character but there are a couple of things that bothered me. One the whole Spike calling Angel sire adn vice-versa. Even though they seem to be on friendly terms (another slgiht annoyance) it just not something I don't think either of them would call each other. In fact I think Spike is the only one who really call anyone by a nickname regularly (key word: I think, you may want to check). Seond annoyance. Willow, Giles and Xander are out on Patro with Buffy??? I can kind fo expect Angel adn SPike and deal, but those three I'm not buying (Unless you have reasons to be explained later as to why all of them were out together, then ignore this)
Other than that I thought it was pretty good. slightly rushed, but nice. The vampire and lycans getting mixed together stratled me. (I thought only Micheal could do that becasue he has the gene or whatever)
Annoes aes aside it was good.
~BlackCat9~
P.s I feel horrible about the tons of criticism and only a few words of good. (You know how it goes, easier to point out the bad than the good)... So just know I really did actually liked this and will be checking up for chapter updates
person TheatreChick
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. Very interesting concept. I wouldn't have thought about melding Underworld and BtVS. Please post more chapters soon. With smut if you don'td.
Td.
person Nabiki
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Jc, REbel, When are writing the next chapters.
person Dassani
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*purs* Dassy like!! *^^* And I'd love to see more! You need to update your fics... and not just this one! Your a talented writer, and I can't wait for more!
person some1
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More!