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for Could I Have This Dance

by Spikesfan

person txjmfan
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Would like to read more.
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please.
person MsSpikester
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute, so far, but the 2nd chappy is put in twice...Says 3 chapters, but its 1, 2, and then 2 again....
Like the story line, but your chapters could be a little longer (probably just cause I'm a greedy person and want more to read, :b LOL) Good plot though....Just keep your muse running and we'll all be satisfied just fine.