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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo this chapter was delicious!
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can have a whole effin cheescake, just update some more soon! Hmm... cheesecake.... Anyhoo, this is a great little story, I LOVE where it's going, plus it's really funny. They should've taught kissing in school... now there's one class I would've really enjoyed!
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this funny. I can see buffy being a comedian. She was all quippy when staking the vamps why not take it on the road.
I also like the way you go from scene to scene. I hope you are getting enough positive feed back to continue this story. When AFF.net was down I went looking at your site for this story because I wanted to read chapters 2 and 3.
I also like the way you go from scene to scene. I hope you are getting enough positive feed back to continue this story. When AFF.net was down I went looking at your site for this story because I wanted to read chapters 2 and 3.
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really think this is funny. I can see buffy being a comedian. She was all quippy when staking the vamps why not take it on the road.
I also like the way you go from scene to scene. I hope you are getting enough positive feed back to continue this story. When AFF was was down I went looking at your site for this story because I wanted to read chapters 2 and 3.
I also like the way you go from scene to scene. I hope you are getting enough positive feed back to continue this story. When AFF was was down I went looking at your site for this story because I wanted to read chapters 2 and 3.
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You'll get your treat...after we all take a VERY COLD shower! LOL! J/K....well, only about the waiting part. My cold shower is waiting. Awesome chapter... but PLEASE *begging here* PLEASE post the next chapter VERY SOON!!!!!!!
Chris
Chris
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bravo! bravo! bravo!
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!!!!!! I bow humbl you your feet.......AGAIN! (maybe I should just stay down here). Just got parts two and three together cos i somehow missed two. Sooooo damn funny and hot. The build up of sexual tension in 2 was wonderful and the way you interlaced the set and the backroom activities in 3 was just wonderful -such a contrast in places that i really think served to make the kissing all the - and yeah you know he finished top of his class in Kissing 101 YUM!!! Can NOT wait for more of this.
Sarah
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to re-use a review but this is so good i had to review on this page too just to convince anyone THINKING of reading this thhey hey really should.
AMAZING!!!!!! I bow humbly at your feet.......AGAIN! (maybe I should just stay down here). Just got parts two and three together cos i somehow missed two. Sooooo damn funny and hot. The build up of sexual tension in 2 was wonderful and the way you interlaced the set and the backroom activities in 3 was just wonderful -such a contrast in places that i really think served to make the kissing all the - and yeah you know he finished top of his class in Kissing 101 YUM!!! Can NOT wait for more of this.
Sarah
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AMAZING!!!!!! I bow humbly at your feet.......AGAIN! (maybe I should just stay down here). Just got parts two and three together cos i somehow missed two. Sooooo damn funny and hot. The build up of sexual tension in 2 was wonderful and the way you interlaced the set and the backroom activities in 3 was just wonderful -such a contrast in places that i really think served to make the kissing all the - and yeah you know he finished top of his class in Kissing 101 YUM!!! Can NOT wait for more of this.
Sarah
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH before I move on to chapter 3....this is working for me....
And he had better want to keep her when he GETS her...is all I gotta say......LOL
Kimber
And he had better want to keep her when he GETS her...is all I gotta say......LOL
Kimber
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!
Lord girl....that was hot....nice job with interlacing her earlier rountine with the different steps of Spike seducing Buffy..
I'm not sure now if.....yes I know.....can you post a chapter of each of your stories very soon.....cause I'm really having withdrawal for the other three, and now this one is calling my name as well....get them fingers a going dear.....
Kimber
Lord girl....that was hot....nice job with interlacing her earlier rountine with the different steps of Spike seducing Buffy..
I'm not sure now if.....yes I know.....can you post a chapter of each of your stories very soon.....cause I'm really having withdrawal for the other three, and now this one is calling my name as well....get them fingers a going dear.....
Kimber