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for Love's A Funny Thing

by patty

person nevernever
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loving.this.
person Addie Logan
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say how much I love Buffy's stand up routine. It describes the end of my last relationship so much I don't know whether to laugh or cry. (Although so far I've been sticking with the laughing ^.~) It's nice to know I'm not the only woman out there that's had those thoughts. Keep this one going!
person Stoney
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, 10 inches, plus close to the same around? Be sure to add the warning of Donkey Punching. Ha! Honestly? I'm skipping through the comedy to get to the sex, but that's a backwards compliment. The sex is great. I can see these two in that smokey back office... Hell, I have BEEN in that smokey back office. Ahh, to be young and slutty again... Looking for more!
person Leianneae
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEvvvvvviiiiiiillllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person MrsBigPileofDust
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Soon. If I don't get back to Devlin, there's gonna be a mutiny!) Damn straight! And William St. James too!!! Really tho' this is a great story, the stage act is cracking me up and the rest is just well... HOT.

-dusty
person pattyanne
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guess I'd better stop walking down dark alleys, huh?
person E.F.
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit, girl, take it on the road! Call Jay Mohr and tell his irish ass you've already got the last comic standing! I've got amateur friends who would KILL for material that good! They would kill you! I'm serious,carecareful out there!
person Nicky
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A mutiny. Correct.

As much as I love your other stuff (like this wonderful chapter) I need my Devlin-dosage. B-E-D has taken the sexiest man alive to an even sexier, level. An impossible level. More Devlin is good.

Anyway, back to this...

This story is amazing. One minute i'm giggling, the next minute i'm drooling. You take this from hot to cold, and you can change my mood in seconds. I have come to think that you'll never fail to amaze me just that little bit more.

I thought ATP was your creative-peak (another of your beautifully crafted fictions) and then you came up with this...WHILE YOU WERE DRUNK!

I am not religious...but I would happily worship you.

Nicky

xxx
person obsessed
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aiiiieeeee! You've got Acting The Part, Devlin, this one and a couple of others....all good...all of which I would like to see where you're going on....please please please finish....SOMETHING!
person just me
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome.The plot is very creative.
Hope you update soon. :)