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for Love's A Funny Thing

by patty

person lolita
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well honey I think that you should get drunk and write more often cause this was an amazing first chapter! lol.

Not only were the jokes hilarious - (I actually didn't think that this concept could work but I read it because hey it's you and trust me it works!)

And now I'm jealous becuase I have a boss that looks like a rat and Buffy has a hottie boss!
person Lolita
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well if that is sexual harrassment then sign me up!!!

Again the routine was hilarious - did you make that up yourself?

I am so glad that I started reading this story!
person lolita
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well yet another brilliant chapter, and some hissiissing with Spike - grr.

And I so know about the kissing thing, the guys that are no good at it should just have their lips sewn shut! lol.
person lolita
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am so NOT impressed with this chapter.





HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT ON A CLIFFHANGER SUCH AS THAT?!!! - AND IF YOU CAN'T TELL I AM SHOUTING!!!!!

lol.

person Kat
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter- even though you did leave us hanging a bit so you better update it soon!! The standup bits are hilarious. Only thing I noticed- I'm pretty sure at one point that you meant 'secretions' and not 'excretions'.
person E.F.
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...b.t.w. .... just re-read the first post I put up here, and I just wanted to say that whole crazy thing was completely due to the evils of cafeine (?) buzzes during the weeee hours of the morning. You've got nothin' to worry about from my buddies. They're all very nice people... and I'm sure the alley's you're steppin' out in are neat, too. :)
person txjmfan
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I think the foreplay is gonna kill me! Anyone got a smoke?
person white rabbit
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good GOD! What did you stop for...your sooo evil, keep writing and never stop
person clau019
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How could you stop THERE??? You're evil!!! LOL
Please, pretty please, more soon!
person E.F.
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! What are trying to DO to me?! Death by unfulfilled Spuff-lust IS punishable by law, P.A.! I know! I checked! ...you sweet torturer, you! ;) BTW - that short you posted about the Spike(s)? Laughed so hard I choked on my Coke2. Swear I did. Keep it up!!