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for Roses for Lucifer

by charlemagne4ever

person thurston moore
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, when I read the first chapter, I wasn't sure what to think about this story. It seemed like a serious story which might lead to a lot of melodrama. But now that I've read the second chapter, I understand. This is very funny. The stilted, seemingly translated to English "Stoker-esque" language, the Bizarro world black is white recasting, David, the MarySue Watcher, these are damned funny. And "The Powers that Be Bad" and "Thank Hell" - BWAH! Those are hilarious. Keep up the laughfest.
person becky
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow its really creepy to think of the Master as good! with the way this story is going you could play it out for many chapters! i really like the idea of mirror images and id love to know more about the buffy there and is dawn was still a key(maybe for a good goddess to save the world from evil), and i think itd rock if there was another threesome with faith, buffy, and angelus this time..oh and what happened to joyce? and harmony? does jenny exist? any of the nerd trio? wheres xandman?(maybe i missed his part) any cordelia in this too? doyle? gunn or fred? hopefully by asking about these characters ive given you some spiffy ideas. please keep writing and give us another great chapter soon:)
person novella
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Normally I never review, but it has to be said that the beginning of this story is fantastic. I hope that you'll update this story frequently and with big chapters because otherwise it would be quite a torture for your readers to wait. Keep it up :-)
person ReneesFic
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. So, humans don't have souls? Does this mean that Spike retained a little soullessness of William when he was turned? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Sandi
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This should be a very good story. Intriguing beginning and I love the final line. It is really chilling. I'm wondering if this will be B/S or B/Aus or maybe B/Aus/S out of curiosity. Any of those would work for me, though.