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by Zulu

person AnnaG
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn it just keeps gettign better. That chapter was HOT.
more soon? please?!
person lemons
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, what an amazing chapter Queen.
keep going! this fic is your best ever!
person Dylan
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me tell you, you are fucking blowing me away with this fic. I've read a lot of Buffy and Faith fic and this one is quickly becoming one of my faves, believe me, that's quite a feat with the amount I've read. I love fucked up Faith, and you have her sooo right. Damn, I wish I could write that good.
I have to make two particular comments, on your last chapter...the bit where Buffy describes those Slayer tingles as feeling 'liomeoomeone was shuffling across the carpet and then poking her'. I nearly pissed my self laughing...in a good way. I don't know if that says a lot about 'my' warped sense of humour or 'yours', cos it's the second time your story has made me laugh out loud. Not something I'm prone to doing with these stories. Anyway, I'd also like to say you are spot on with the sexual tension in this, for me personally at least. Fuck, that last part was hot...please bring me more and leave me in a giggling wet mess on the floor again. I love it.
person Wicked
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaahh I like this story! See, I love Angel, he's a big ol' puppet but the story of Faith killing Angel and then getting it on with Buffy? Oh yeah, hehehe. Good job - keep it coming!
person Jane
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aha Chapter Four... of course it was brilliant as always, but I expected no less from you. And what's this about real life? You must be joking. Going to work, going to school, eating, sleeping and getting laid are FAR less important than writing fan fiction! Especially when it's really really ridiculously good fan fiction, involving Buffy and Faith, and being filled with hotness. No, real life must not come first. I mean get your priorities stht, ht, woman!
Hehe you know I'm just teasin... this fic is brilliant and I adore it. Do more when you can, I shall be satisfied with that.
person EvilDoer
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*GASP!* I am just so amazed with this fic! jsut when i think it cant get any better it does! I mean wow... is there a church of the holy Queen Zulu some where i can join up with. Im sure you mus tbe the patron saint of fanfic right...
MORE SOON!!! *drooling*
person Shane
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH...MY...GOD! Queen this is simply freakin fantastic! Im loving your willow character and the tension between her and faith. i cant wait to see what happens next... NO! i mean it! i CAN'T WAIT! i think my head will explode if i have to wait much longer... please save my brain! update this one quick!
person lemons
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Queen this fic is really good! I mean you have me hanging on every damrd! rd! please you gotta write more!
person poet
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say except MORE! this is hands down your best story ever. Definately the best badgirls fic i have ever read.
PLEASE updat soon. Its all so real, true to character, perfect combo of the scripted and your original words. I gotta have more!!!!!
person Jane
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why have you not yet updated?? Don't you know I am in awe of this fic and beg for you to update it immediately? Well if you didn't know, then you know now. You must update it. My life depends on it. It's a good thing I have tomorrow off from work... I wie che checking this site once every three hours for Chapter Four.