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by Zulu

person Dylan
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You just HAD to make me cry didn't ya...Sitting here like a big wuss with tears in my eyes, wanting to read the story again and have it turn out nice. Sheesh. But then I guess the ending fit the story perfectly. You really captured the emotions well, and I hope...No wait...I'm threatening here for you to give the chosen two just a little bit of happiness in the sequel. Even though I secretly like the angst, it doesn't really brighten my day...lol. Well done though, cos this is going in my personal file of fave fics...which is surprisingly small given the amount of stuff I read, so be honored...I am that you name checked me at the top...But I'm gonna shut up now cos your head is big enough *wink* Cheers.
person wynter
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok good story! But I have to say, you have to write a sequel! I mean Faith has to come back. You can't just elave it with a cliffhanger like that. WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

If I need to I'll get down and beg and grovel...really I will! I...I...well I'd give you money if I had any!

I really did like the story though. I'm not a big fan of songfics, but with the lyrics at the beginning, it was wonderfully done.

~Wynter~
person marie
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wicked story, i hope theres s sequel. I really loved the twist with Angel, i wasn't ecpecting that at all.
person JustMe
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story :D
it's so sad that Faith had to leave in the end
Can't wait for a sequel :D:D
person Dylan
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so....I dunno...really. If was like hot, but tender and intimate, and I felt like I shouldn't be interupting them by reading it. Like I was completely in the way and should leave them to it because it was something so private between them...I know, I sound a little crazy, right?. But I can honestly say I've never felt like that about a sex scene before. n't n't know what that means...But hell, I do know it was good.
person callistosbitch
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Sequel! We need a sequel!
person Shane
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow Queen that was simply beautiful. This entire fic is so amazing each chapter manages to blow my mind a little bit more... there won't be much left if you keep this up! ha! I'm just captivated by this story, and there is more? I can't wait! Soon I hope!
person ChO
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! x)
I loved your fic, #)
Sequel, please? xD
;**
person lajolie
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
beeeautifulllll!
person EvilDoer
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl! I really dont know how to give feedback on that chapter! It was so beyond perfect. all the discriptions and feelings really came across, all true to the characters. It was sexy and heated but romantic all at once. it was really amazing! Update soon please!