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GREAT so far! Keep writing, this should be interesting :D

Interesting idea. I'd love to read more.

This is a nice start. Very interesting premise you've got going. It'll be interesting to see how you "rewrite" history to explain things that Buffy was directly connected to/responsible for. Just a quick side note, you might want to have a fresh read as there are a few confused tenses and missing words here and there. But, altogether, a nice idea. Looking forward to more.

regent