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for Unexpected Arrival

by neen

person Kimber
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For those who wish to read ahead....she has more chapters over on fanfiction.net....I think it's up to chapter 13 or so there.....could be she is goto ato add more smutty goodness since she has brought it over to the adult one.......


Kimber
person Draconiansrock
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was an amazing update! I love how u put Buffy's self-realization in there that she needed Spike more than she knew. Also good to know that Spike had it in him to stand up to Buffy even with her hands down his pants :). Plz continue as soon as possible!
person Tigger
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay I thought this was going to be a B/S fic. I don't think I like it that much unless your going for a dramatic get back together secen! Then YAY!!
person Lorraine
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Creative idea. I'd love to read more.
person Karen
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I just want to cry for Buffy!
person LadyLiz
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Ok, so maybe everyone else saw the plot twist coming, but not me! Maybe it's cause I'm blond. LOL! Wow. Just an amazing chapter. Poor Buffy, I feel really bad for her. But hey, it's about time she got some sense knocked into her! And poor Spike too. I feel so sorry for him, losing Rebecca and all. Ayways, WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC job, keep up the great work!!
person feistypumpkin
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hhhmmmmm?? What's going on here. Really good start. Looking forward to more . Plz update soon.
person Larceny
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please! I like all the twists.
person Draconiansrock
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update! I especially like how u put good demons in there and the fact that Travers is a evil one. That's an interesting twist to say the least....just one question........why wouldn't Spike know about there being good demons? Or did he mention them and the Scoobies just ignored him?........slightly confusing but still overall still good. I also like how u are making Buffy jealous of the relationship between Rebecca and Spike. I wonder......do Rebecca and Spike ever have sex? Or does Spike not able to perform 'cause he loves someone else as well? Hopefully you'll address these questions of mine........PLZ continue the story! Can't wait for the next update!
person Burnz
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well this is an fascinating bit of a history lesson. Good stuff