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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay
So you think Spike after he figures out that she had to die for Buffy to live will be able to look at Buffy let alone love her to pieces. Buffy will always think that he's with her because of the connection she has with Rebecca. Then the baby is going to grow up and find all this out and hate Buffy for being alive at the cost of her/or his mothers death. Xander was right...this is just not right. We have 20 chapters of having to deal with Rebecca and still will in memory or spirit as well. I find it hard that you will get Spuffy out of this for she will still be here since now we have to deal with Spike's grieving and Buffy feeling guilty and everyone feeling sorry for the now motherless baby who's mother was beyond selfish knowing what was going to happen and still played with peoples emotions and hearts. You will not have to worry, my curiosty has been dealt with enough now to know this story line is no longer for me......I really had hoped you would make this work. But I really don't see how or way Spike would want Buffy any where near him or his child if it survives....for she is the reason Rebecca is dead in his eyes. For her not to tell him she must have known or thought he would have killed Buffy for her to survive. Spike is never one to think before he speaks. I'm sure Xander will not keep his mouth shut and Spike will find out what Rebecca told him that will even piss him off more......
So you think Spike after he figures out that she had to die for Buffy to live will be able to look at Buffy let alone love her to pieces. Buffy will always think that he's with her because of the connection she has with Rebecca. Then the baby is going to grow up and find all this out and hate Buffy for being alive at the cost of her/or his mothers death. Xander was right...this is just not right. We have 20 chapters of having to deal with Rebecca and still will in memory or spirit as well. I find it hard that you will get Spuffy out of this for she will still be here since now we have to deal with Spike's grieving and Buffy feeling guilty and everyone feeling sorry for the now motherless baby who's mother was beyond selfish knowing what was going to happen and still played with peoples emotions and hearts. You will not have to worry, my curiosty has been dealt with enough now to know this story line is no longer for me......I really had hoped you would make this work. But I really don't see how or way Spike would want Buffy any where near him or his child if it survives....for she is the reason Rebecca is dead in his eyes. For her not to tell him she must have known or thought he would have killed Buffy for her to survive. Spike is never one to think before he speaks. I'm sure Xander will not keep his mouth shut and Spike will find out what Rebecca told him that will even piss him off more......
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. I don't know what Samuel should be though...
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry sweetie. I am going to have to bail on this. The baby thing, especially with R. carrying it, is just to much for this mule to pull. Even if for some strange reason you had Spike confess his undying love to Buffy; have them do the horizontal mambo on the floor right at this second; follow that by a quickie divorce from R. and a vegas wedding there is just no way this could be Spuffy. Again, I think you would do well to put this on a general Buffy instead of Buffy/William-Spike. Just to avoid getting flamed. Good luck with it.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DO NOT TELL ME YOU WENT THERE.
Rebecca is now repregnanted with her and Williams baby.....SO NOT RIGHT!!!!!!!!
Listen, let me explain Spuffy for you in my opinion....It means Spike's main focus in the story is BUFFY.....NOT no Mary Sue.......HE claims Buffy, NOT a Mary SUE.....he impregnants BUFFY....not some damn MARY SUE!!!!!!!
PLEASE REMOVE THIS FROM THE SPUFFY DIRECTORY AND PLACE IT WHERE IT BELONGS.....IN THE GENERAL SECTION WHERE THE ONES THAT LIKE MAJOR SPIKE AND MARYSUE CAN ENJOY IT........
If you do spuffy this what the hell have you left for Spuffy to enjoy together.....NOT A DAMN THING....cause good ole Rebecca has been there and done that now.....BULL SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She is supposed to kiss Rebecca's feet and say, "Oh thank you, because of you I can have my vampire lover and his child to raise....oh thank you ole great ancestor you.....if it wasn't for you I don't know what I would have done."
That is when old Spike is done grieving over his dead or disappeared first CLAIMED wife. Hell Rebecca not only get to be is first human wife, but his first true vampire mate as well.......GET REAL!
Or better yet, if the child is not born or whatever....there is something more for Spike to wallow in grief over....
I can't remember if this is you first story or not....I think it is.....Do you outline before you start and finish your plot, or do you just write for the moment.....casue I'm getting the impression you write for the moment and do not think ahead of where your are REALLY going with a story.....too many stories in the story that is confusing and bogging down whatever it is you are trying to say.....lost me with the Giles, Katherine and who Samuel really is....again, too much bogginess here.
Sorry, just not buying you eventual Spuffiness here.....or at least a realistic one.
Rebecca is now repregnanted with her and Williams baby.....SO NOT RIGHT!!!!!!!!
Listen, let me explain Spuffy for you in my opinion....It means Spike's main focus in the story is BUFFY.....NOT no Mary Sue.......HE claims Buffy, NOT a Mary SUE.....he impregnants BUFFY....not some damn MARY SUE!!!!!!!
PLEASE REMOVE THIS FROM THE SPUFFY DIRECTORY AND PLACE IT WHERE IT BELONGS.....IN THE GENERAL SECTION WHERE THE ONES THAT LIKE MAJOR SPIKE AND MARYSUE CAN ENJOY IT........
If you do spuffy this what the hell have you left for Spuffy to enjoy together.....NOT A DAMN THING....cause good ole Rebecca has been there and done that now.....BULL SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She is supposed to kiss Rebecca's feet and say, "Oh thank you, because of you I can have my vampire lover and his child to raise....oh thank you ole great ancestor you.....if it wasn't for you I don't know what I would have done."
That is when old Spike is done grieving over his dead or disappeared first CLAIMED wife. Hell Rebecca not only get to be is first human wife, but his first true vampire mate as well.......GET REAL!
Or better yet, if the child is not born or whatever....there is something more for Spike to wallow in grief over....
I can't remember if this is you first story or not....I think it is.....Do you outline before you start and finish your plot, or do you just write for the moment.....casue I'm getting the impression you write for the moment and do not think ahead of where your are REALLY going with a story.....too many stories in the story that is confusing and bogging down whatever it is you are trying to say.....lost me with the Giles, Katherine and who Samuel really is....again, too much bogginess here.
Sorry, just not buying you eventual Spuffiness here.....or at least a realistic one.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really....Spuffy....
Spike and Rebecca is going to be parents....and you expect us to believe Spuffy.....okay, lets see where this is leading...Yep, can see Buffy now loving being a step, or whatever that would make her.....
To be honest I haven't a clue as to WHO or WHAT Samuel is to Giles....don't care either....you lost me in all that mix. Haven't a clue where the whammy essence thing is going....and WHY the hell is BECCA PREGNANT?
So Buffy's scares are gone.....which scares....her bites from Drac and Angel? What about Becca's claiming bite, is that gone? and if not, why not?
Spike and Rebecca is going to be parents....and you expect us to believe Spuffy.....okay, lets see where this is leading...Yep, can see Buffy now loving being a step, or whatever that would make her.....
To be honest I haven't a clue as to WHO or WHAT Samuel is to Giles....don't care either....you lost me in all that mix. Haven't a clue where the whammy essence thing is going....and WHY the hell is BECCA PREGNANT?
So Buffy's scares are gone.....which scares....her bites from Drac and Angel? What about Becca's claiming bite, is that gone? and if not, why not?
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I?m holding you to your word, because the last development was SO not needed. Sorry, but the only one I want to see knocked up by Spike is Buffy. Well, gotta keep the faith, huh?
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still think your story has merit but I must agree with the other reviewers that this is really a general BtVS story. You appear to take great pains to include a multitude of side stories in you fic. While they are dramatic or comedic they make the tale as a whole branch out and become a bit more scattered so the story seems to meander and not go forward with any speed. Good luck with bring it together and finishing it.
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please.
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah, said I was through, but thought I would see where you had come at making this Buffy....
Read the part about the ring and said to myself....what a slap in Buffy's face that one was.....She may love him, but she does not trust him, and why should she/ she loved and trusted a souled vamp and look what it got her grief from her friends especally after Jenny's death/ Spike in her mind is like Angel, if he loses his chip he will go back to his murdering ways like Angel did after losing his soul......his pursuit of the ring was to destroy her.....if she had not pulled it off his finger he would have. He followed Oz and tortured Angel to get the ring back......not for the joys of walking in the sunlight, but to be lord and ruler and make name for himself as a bad ass master vampire that killed his 3rd slayer. Will be interesting if you address any of this in your y...y....or not.
Kimber
Just curious now how you will make this a happy Spuffy ending...
Read the part about the ring and said to myself....what a slap in Buffy's face that one was.....She may love him, but she does not trust him, and why should she/ she loved and trusted a souled vamp and look what it got her grief from her friends especally after Jenny's death/ Spike in her mind is like Angel, if he loses his chip he will go back to his murdering ways like Angel did after losing his soul......his pursuit of the ring was to destroy her.....if she had not pulled it off his finger he would have. He followed Oz and tortured Angel to get the ring back......not for the joys of walking in the sunlight, but to be lord and ruler and make name for himself as a bad ass master vampire that killed his 3rd slayer. Will be interesting if you address any of this in your y...y....or not.
Kimber
Just curious now how you will make this a happy Spuffy ending...
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still like your story although I am starting to get bogged down with the side stories. Since it may be a matter of life and death for a few if the characters I was expecting a good bit of urgency on their parts. I look forward to your updates.