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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been trying to review this story for many chapters. But the increased traffic lately made it very difficult. Anyhow, I really like reading this story. I think the pace of the plot is well timed. Although this is the 'Adult Fan Fiction Site' it is still great to actually have a plot and story line to go with all the 'Adultness'. So, in saying that I am looking forward to some good 'Adult' action whenevery the story winds its way to that point. Until then, greaty story idea, great plot, great characterizations, and great writing.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooo.......you can't do that, that is just mean, please i need more!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO, NO
how can yu do that to us?!?
stop right there in the middle
looking over the edge of a cliff
*sniffle*
so mean!
but at least u update like once everyday (that's awesome so keep it up by the way!)
and angel finally got some acction! Yay!
anyway keep up the good work!
write write!
how can yu do that to us?!?
stop right there in the middle
looking over the edge of a cliff
*sniffle*
so mean!
but at least u update like once everyday (that's awesome so keep it up by the way!)
and angel finally got some acction! Yay!
anyway keep up the good work!
write write!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You sneaky little devil you. I like it so far. Keep it going please. We forgive you for taking some time off. As long as you don't break Spike's heart even more. Pleaseohpleaseohplease spare him!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tease.
fyi i'd much prefer a longer wait for a fuller chapter than a short wait for a short chapter. but thats just me. still loving the story. and i'm super jealous that you get to meet james.
fyi i'd much prefer a longer wait for a fuller chapter than a short wait for a short chapter. but thats just me. still loving the story. and i'm super jealous that you get to meet james.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that is the mother of all cliff hangers. But I'll e good, and wait patiently for the next part of the chapter.
Yeah, okay, patience isn't working. Hurry please...
Yeah, okay, patience isn't working. Hurry please...
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah! i actually teared up reading that last chapter, that almost never happens. i continue to love this story.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Your killing me the suspense!!! Hopefully they'll have a happy ending, right? I'm on the edge of my seat!!! I love this fiction!!!!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Take that Spike!! lol Great scene...I love that Buffy stood up for herself. I mean, not that I don't feel bad for Spike and see it from his and Angel's perspective, it was just nice to see Buffy speak up too. This is just getting more and more intense; you've got me on the edge of my seat. Thanks for posting so often!!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay...um...I've been secretly reading this...telling myself that I wasn't supposed to read this since I'm not exactly a Spuffy or B/A fan at all...but, I have been reading it since the first chapter and I'm still reading it! LOL This is a good plot line and a great story...and despite my whole non-Spuffy and B/A status, I have to admit that I've been enjoying it. Good job corrupting me. LOL
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