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by Janina

person Kimber
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH

and the plot thickens......is this going to be that one time they where intimate...LOL! OH wait that was on the series...LOL

Will be interesting, would love to be a fly on the wall for this up coming meeting of the undead....hey, wait, better yet I will be reading it first hand when it comes from your head, through them there fingers and delivered here.....hope you are typing as we speak.....LOL!

So a great heart wrenching scene......still think Spike should have first dibs on the cherry picking....LOL!

Kimber

Nah, you know this doesn't mean I like your story....nope, doesn't.....NOPE, can't make me say it......LOL.....well you might brib me with more chapters.....(wink wink)
person nevernever
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmm another chapter. makes me happy. i can't WAIT for the convo between angel and spike.
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so curious about what Spike and Angel are going to say to each other. Please update soon...
person Kate
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, this was a good chapter. Angel didn't come off as a baby at all - just someone hurting and in pain who hasn't yet gotten to the place where he can set back a bit to assess the situation and his feelings. Although I definitely think his talk with Spike is getting him there. Great interaction between the two nemisis/friends/brothers. I think the whole scene worked well. Now on to the smut!! ;) lol
person Kimber
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a fine mess poor Buffy is in

My heartbreaks more for Spike, cause he has never been truly loved for himself.....Buffy, has never known what it is to love sooo great and not have it returned in kind......Angel, well seems Angel doesn't like being second best.... It think it is time for Angel to wake up and smell the blood burnin' and think like the mighty thinker/planner of his magnitude of being the elder of his clan.

He should know what has to be done....and be vampire enough to do it....he more or less is the head of the family and if he loves Buffy the way he says he does....he will act before Spike reacts and does something terrible......

God, I can't wait for the next chappie....and I'm glad you had a great time and James is still flirty.....even though he is more grown up about now.....not taking his shirt off any more and all.......LOL!

Kimber
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. I like how you have them talking things out. ANd that nothing's too easy. Though I'm still hoping for a happy ending...
person nevernever
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
two chapters in one day! you make my heart happy. :)
person nevernever
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am so jealous that you got to meet james. and i'm so glad you updated. update again soon. i want to know what happens!
person Inanis
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gotta tell you I am loving this fic. And I almost never go AU stuff, I'm much more of a story line based person. But this just all fits. I look forward to another chapter. Excellent Job!
person Kimber
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm

Would have and could have waited for the whole thing.....LOL! I hope you have a great time seeing the flirty James Marstars in person.....Now I'm going into trying to be patient LOL after the ditty of a cliffhanger you got going on....


Kimber