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for Dance for Me

by PaleRider

person txjmfan
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter.

Chris
person Azrielle6969
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. More please.
person Kimber
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bitchy Buffy had better wake up and smell the blood cooking.....better claim her vampire before it's too late......yep....
LOL!

Him saying he was sorry should be proof enough to her that as much as she is hooked on him....he is 10 times worse....that she is so far inside his undead, but loving heart he would die for her......she wouldn't have to stake him, he'd do it himself and save her the heartache.....

Kimber
person Kari Mouke
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have had the worst time trying to give you a review for chapter 8 - which I loved. I've been sight hoppin! So, here it goes, maybe, if it works: this chapter was really well written, I could definitely hear the characters speaking in this one. I love the steps you took with Buffy and Spike's relationship in just one short chapter and I can't wait to see how it effects the rest of the story. Thanks for updating,
Kari
person willowmouse
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi - This is a great story - well writen, with a good plot. I like the way you write Buffy in this .. not as "high strung" - looking forward to more :)
person txjmfan
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!

Chris
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please...I love this story...and a drunk Spike. YAY. I want the next chappie asap...
person MsSpikester
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Help....must need more....not enough yet...gasp....
Just kidding, chapter 7 was well done, leaving me wanting once again, lol....Take your time updating....NOT! (Please?)
person Burnz
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Spike. I wonder if he will confused, happy, angry, upset, sullena bia bit of all when he wakes up.
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please