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for Bittersweet Book One

by Bloodsrose

person bansheeh
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM




Ok

1. u gotta now that this is good!!!!!!!
2. Gotta update often or were gonna forget the fic, and i dont want that!!!
3. please a little longer chapters ....its sooo much more fun when u get to
be sucked into the fic ......with to short Chaps that dont happen......

this could be a great fic!!!!!!!!! Just please update more often .....

Love bansheeh......



person Lia
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, and the premise is unique, and I look forward to see how you will develop this story.
person Laura
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story is good. I wish you would have longer chapters and develop the story line a little more.
person Anonymous
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks good - want more.
person bansheeh
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey,

you now your gonna
UPDATE THIS AT LEAST 2 A WEEK , DONT YOU*


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person Jaime
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So this is your first Fanfic. I have to say I really like what you have wrote so far and can't wait to see what happens on the road trip.