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You know what word makes me laugh?

Splooge!


Ok, now that I've got that out of my system, i have to thank you for that great chapter! Spike in the bathroom was SO hot! I had mental images and everything!

I'm liking this more and more every chapter.

Couldn't stop giggling once you said splooge...i think that's wonderful. He he.

Some more would be nice *hint hint*

Nicky

HEHEHE!!! Very good Pagan!

Dear Lord! Please tell me you intend to updatis ris regularly. After two chapters I'm already in love.
I've read you fictions before and you've never disappointed me... ever! I'm loving the slight age difference
and I'm really interested in Spike's past, will Dru eventually show up again just as our lovely couple is startng
to get their act together...

Well whatever you have happen I can't wait to see it!

Update Soon!

Much Luv,
Tygerlily

ok, i'm not saying i don't love the angst, but if i don't get some spuffy loving or at least some spuffy smoochies, then i will NOT be responsible for whatever i do next!!!

"twitching lump......" *Falls out of chair laughing.* Awwww poor Spike. LOL!! His poor brain's really doing a number on him. I just hope and pray he starts listening to that naughty voice in his head more!! She wants him, he wants her, stop thinking and just get to it already!! LOL! Sorry, I'm impatient. Can't wait for more!!

I can't wait for the seduction :-)

Now comes the actual reveiw...

I loved that chapter. Spike's really trying to be all strong, but we all know that he's going to give into her. I can imagine how hot it's going to get during the next few chapters, and i can't wait.

:D

Nicky

Aweez!eez! You're killing me (in a delicious way) so hot already and they haven't ACTUALLY done anything. Can't wait til Spike cracks, especially if Bu's g's gonna turn it on big style, I can just see him getting all flustered and trying to fight it. More more more
Sarah
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A perfectly wonderful chapter : intense , moving , and your portrait of Spike's past life was interesting to understand his personality , and how much he has been wounded ; liked that Buffy wanted to listen to his musical performances , and that she realized that she was attracted to him , body and mind.
The lesson was lovely , full of promises , and their conversation showed so much connection , already , between them;
shared values strenghtening a relation , it is a good perspective !
Your William moves me , your Buffy pleases me , in her sweetness , in the way she s tos to do things fervently..I see a beautiful ney ney for them : she could be the essential presence by his side to find again how tastes happiness.

I'm completely in love with your story !

Love it so far. MORE PLEASE!