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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God this is SO mean, I really need a cold shower, but I have to go to school in 5 minutes!!
But it was really good, keep it up! :-)
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I believe in constructive criticism, so I?m going to be honest with you. I loved chapter 5, I thought it was unbelievably *hot*, but I didn?t like the moment where Buffy first comes on to Spike. I know she had to be serious about it and seem very decided because of Spike being so self-conscious about the whole thing; but it still could have been just a little bit more subtle. I?m only saying this because it seems a little out of place when you first read it, but the good thing is that, the rest of the writing is so good that if you keep reading past that scene, you just forget and the story goes on nicely.
Please, don?t hate me! :)
Keep up the good work!
Please, don?t hate me! :)
Keep up the good work!
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:)
wonder how sore the are gonna be in the morning ;P
wonder how sore the are gonna be in the morning ;P
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!!!! She ain't shy is she? Magnificent chapter Pagan. I think I went into total melt down. Can't wait to see what else these two get up to.
Sarah
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Sarah
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hooray! hot spuffy lovin!
i LOVE this story (i have such a thing for older spike stories). keep up the fabulous work!
i LOVE this story (i have such a thing for older spike stories). keep up the fabulous work!
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was great. Very hot. Had to read the chapter twice! Looking forward to more.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It took five chapters to get there, and it was well worth the wait!
I loved it! I loved every second of it!
I'm a bit nervous about the reprecussions now though...in the morning, Spike's going to get his brain back...I just hope that he doesn't rejBuffBuffy now...
...or maybe he should, because then she can seduce him again...because that was FUN!
I bow down to your greatness!
(Kinky)Nicky
I loved it! I loved every second of it!
I'm a bit nervous about the reprecussions now though...in the morning, Spike's going to get his brain back...I just hope that he doesn't rejBuffBuffy now...
...or maybe he should, because then she can seduce him again...because that was FUN!
I bow down to your greatness!
(Kinky)Nicky
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ,poignant , last chapter.( and insanely hot , of course , when William left his mind wandering in naughty fantasies..)
I love the direction taken by your story ! I love the interaction between Buffy and William : they have a real connection , beyond their sexual attraction , and even if I 'm impatient to see them become more intimate , I appreciate the pace.
A great story !
I love the direction taken by your story ! I love the interaction between Buffy and William : they have a real connection , beyond their sexual attraction , and even if I 'm impatient to see them become more intimate , I appreciate the pace.
A great story !
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Lovin' this story.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one.