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Completely wicked!! Still loving this but what a place to leave it... hope ya gonna update soon!! sooo dark!!

Aww, these poor boys... I just wanna cuddle 'em and keep 'em safe. I feel so badly for William. I could see his past creeping up on him and invading on his life. I don't think it could have happened any other way. I'm also sorry to see him lose closeness with his brother over it too. It's just so sad to see this affect every aspect of his life. He's just terrified. I'm looking forward to more of this one. I really hope they can pull out of it together.

Poor Wills.... Good chapter, cant wait to see Will and Buffy on their first date... how cute, he needs something good in his life... How far after the last chapter is this one then?

I almost didn't read this one, as this dark of a fic isn't normally my thing. However, I did and I'm glad for it. I admire the way you've put this one together. There's that darker side of everyone, and what if Rupert had gone that route? It's so sad to see William put through so much, and to take all this blame on himself for making things right. What is even worse I think, at least from my perspective, is Xander. I think if I was in William's case I'd almost be bitter towards him for going through this. But in the end I find I'm really only sad that Xander can't see what's going on right under his nose. I understand that he doesn't, partly because of everyone's natural ability to forgoe the bad in favor of keeping up the appearance of a happy life. It's what he clings to regardless of what happens. I almost cringe to think what William's future holds for him. I can't help but think he won't get out of it unless someone pulls him out, or if his father starts eyeing Xander with more than a little interest.

Honestly, I am looking forward to reading more of this one. No, it's not everyone's cup of tea, but I do wish for you to continue with this one. It's a brilliant study of the darker edges of human life.

Great Story! Please update again soon! I have to see what happens next! :)

Good story...more more! I wanna see what happens next.

Really well written fic. But please please please can the boys get out of there soon?? Or at least - keep writing so i know eventually they will get out (pretty please :)

Tooooooo short!
Toooo daaaamn shoooort!

*whines*


Druffine

Great fic... Its really interesting... pls keep posting

Hey snow,

I said it a few times, but I repeat it eagerly: I love your story!

Please keep writing/posting!

You are a fabulous writer, the way you are able to express the mood and atmosphere
is impressive. I even felt my throat close up so believable and real did you get the imagery!

Thanks for this beautiful dark unique piece of fanfiction!

Druffine