rate_review Reviews

Great addition. This is getting more exciting every chapter. Keep up the wonderful job!

I'm glad you updated it's GREAT so far and I'm wondering what will happen next. . .Keep up the great work I love it.

Honestly I like it. It is very well written, and the personalities you created are unique. All in all it was a great story and I cant wait for more.

please contiue the story. when i first came across the summary i avoided it, but im glad i finally read it. hurry up and give us more chas sos so spike can hav e his freedom! great writing i never thought it was possible to loathe a fictional character(giles) so much or to root for two brothers getting together, but at least wait till xander is 15 rewrite his age if you have to but let it be easy to overlook the squick, and get to the heart of the characters feelings. thanks for a graet story please finish it. there is nothing worse than a slow wip or worse a permenant wip.

Great chapter SP!! Beautifully written.... that Rupert really is a piece of work!! I just wanna kill him... I'm getting afraid for Xan now cos daddy seems to be getting more and more out of control... cant wait for update!

I'm loving this story! I like how you had Will transform into Spike, now all he needs is the duster! And, I like that he's dating Buffy, will there be Spuffy, now that he's Spike?

They storyline is really good, a little scary, thinking of child molestation and whatnot, but good.

Just got back from hols and saw your update :o)... the transformation of William... Love it and cant wait for more

Woah! I really love this story. I felt so bad for William during the last two chapters. And now he's becoming Spike. You go! Awesome story!

Oh, those poor boys. They've been through so much. I'm so afraid of what will happen to William if this goes on much longer for them. I hope then fin find a way out of it soon. Lovely work, as per usual dear. I'm looking forward to more.

omgomgomg! PLEASE email me when you update this. ITS SOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!