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I like how you have chapter 1 at the end of the story... lol... please update soon...

OMG you seriously have to update this! i don't think i've ever been as instantly drawn to a story as i have to this fic! (and i've read hundreds of fics!) i love William, he's so lost and scared but i think he'll get there in the end. I gotta say i didn't see any of the blot twists coming! and there all brilliant, they keep the fic so interesting and unsepected. I like that willow and xander are twins, and i actuly like what happeing to poor xander- and by like i mean the charater building it does- he and william will have that in commona nd i think it'll make it easier for william to be exepted into the group if there are other troubled pasts in the mix. Poor willow too, it must be killing her to see that happening to her brother. I felt so sorry fro william when that guy propersitioned him, but it did make for great angst and character devalopment, williams as well as the others as they are seeing other sides of william and hopefuly getting to understand him better. I would however like to fit Wesley over the head with a book for being such a arrognat prick. I just hope he doesn't cause any problems in the future. having buffy and faith there as well is also very very cool! so , well , WOW! did i mention i love this fic yet? hehehe ta luv, please update soooooon, tamara

I LOVE this story!!! Please finish it!

this is really a great story beautiful sad heartwarming allin one please write more of it

Just found your story. :) I must say it's quite enjoyable, even if the rape scene was a bit icky. :) As far as where you're going with it? I have no idea.. no clue, all I hope for is a happy ending. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please, Please update this story. I'm loving it, please.

Pleeezze more! *begs* Is he going to end up with wesley, xander or that "customer" from the bronze (please make william beat him up with superstrength or something*g*)?



Burn_child: I wondered about that too... why does this story have to beginnings?!

I just found this story and I gotta say: Soo loving it. =) More soon please.

Raaaaaaaaah!!!! Update more often! MORE MORE MORE!!! Please? I can't wait to see what will happen when everybody discover what's happening at the Harris and about William's former life... it's going to be a Spander isnt' it? I really hope so!

At first i want say that this is one of the best au story i have read.
But all i can read from chapter one is to this point: ?Two dollars and thirty-four cents,? he counted. He had enough to get a cup of" and i don't think that this is the true end of chapter one.
who can help?
Maybe it's not important but i realy want to know what happend at the beginning.