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for Won't Be Long, Love

by lucky021

person becky
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cool story! thanks so much for sharin it with us!
person Kimber
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The only problem is she's dead and can't come back as she....the people she and Spike used to work for before all this knows they are alive, they can't hide when they are back with their family.....You don't think the government didn't know she had jumped ship....and would be waiting for her.....Neither she or Will would be alive...his government would have killed him to keep him quiet once he came back to his uncle's home. She would have been on the list to shoot and kill and they would've known her real name with her face being plastered in the news. Buffy or Will would never have been able to come back home, get intouch with their family so easily......and would be living the life on the run. Giles' connections would have told him of Buffy defection from the beginning..great fantasy love, loss, love, loss, love, loss, to back to love......she would have been better off leaving quietly with Will, or as she had promised, in a year,......now her face is plastered, and indentity will be revealed, and she would never be able to show her face without wondering if someone recognized her.......The government would be up Joyces rear investigating her daughter as a terriorist. but then thats just my opinion not the opinion of the majority I'm sure......Personally I think she should have left with Will and be done with it......you don't love someone more then anything if you are ready to give your life to a cause that separates you from them.....you love the cause.......

Kimber
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please finish the story
person Inanis
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do so love your stories. This and Blonde on Blonde are right up there on the list of faves, es, probably the top two.
It is a highlight in my day everytime you update.
person Raven\'s Halo
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Started reading this cuz I had to do all this research and a huge presentation and stuff on the IRA one year in high school. Even though it was an assignment, it was still pretty interesting, and I learned a lot. Though I'm thinkin now I've forgotten most of it. ^^; Oh well.
Nice story so far... I'm going to have to continue reading now.
person spikedchick
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure about this story yet. As I'm, I guess, you could say, politically too much involved to not get attached.
I love the Spuffy storyline and probably would like it even more if the story happened under different circumstances.

I'm not sure if I like what Angel obviously did in the last chapter, nope, I am positive that I don't like it. Bu'm i'm interested in how you gonna handle it. This whole situation could weigh on Buffy's conscious and make her feel too guilty to get something goin with Spike asap ... but we'll see about that.

I'll definitely keep reading, as I hate to not know how's it goin to end.
I like the way you write and am interested in how you goin to end this story.

take care
sC
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm so glad your back, I've been waiting for forever for these next few chapters. Please Please PLEASE continue writing. I look forward to seeing more of your work
person nevernever
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh! don't let it end there! more more!

i love this story. love.love.love.
person BeltaneMD
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It's different and interesting and I definately think that you should update it soon! :)
person slackerace
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, don't give up on this one. Between this and Blonde, you are writing some of the best fic out there...