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for Did I Ever Thank You....

by sarahaless

person Annette
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course we want another chapter and a lot of Spuffy sex, too!
person regent
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, very (some exponential number) HOT! Wonderful job of recapturing the heat of the original scene and amping it up quite a few notches. Loved that it seemed Spike had preplanned it, but was, as usual, taking advantage of available resources. Best part is that (I assume) we're gonna get to see the tease paid off and I'm thinking, in a way that Xander, then or now, wouldn't have been "up" to. BTW, I'd just like to point out that that is an old dress - so ripping might not be a bad thing LOL

regent
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, I'm curious. About whether or not he'll remember (or knows) that what she told him mirrors what she said to Xander, how he'll react, and what'll happen next. Besides the mind-blowing sex that those two always seem to have. So, here's hoping you continue! And soon!
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to say sorry about the repeat reviews! My computer went all weird on me for a bit and I ended up sending it more than needed. Look up the word dork and you will find me. Anyway...I'm babbling so...going now.
person Lucky-112
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY want to now what happens next!! Great story! Please continue.
person oleanderrose
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. And hell yea I'm wildley curious!
person jbee
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOWW!! Your version seems more erotic than the scene did in WSWB. Enjoyed Spike's(Xander's) reactions to Buffy's actions - very nicely done. Eager to see what you have in store for Buffy when Spike "responds"!!!
person txjmfan
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wildly curious doesn't even begin to cover it! More...please...SOON!
person KAren
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did you know curiosity killed the cat? Good thing i'm not a cat.
person AnneLiz
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great re-enactment, Sarah!
I really hated it when Buffy did it with Xander... 'cause, eww, that's Xander.. and because, well, poor Angel... bitch much, Buffy?!
But now... this dance with Spike... 'William'... is much much more better... and hopefully he will not have the same reaction of Xander (namely, staying in the middle of the dance floor, mouth agape!)
Continue it, I'm waiting for the next chappie :)