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August 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Cute.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet baby Jane, thank you so much for your darlin' story about my beloveds. This is one of the most touching things I can imagine Spike doing for Buffy. How wonderful that you got this story in your head and shared it. The transition is smooth and I can hear them so I can see them--don't know how that works, just does andit makes the story for me. Thank you very much again.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!
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February 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2 .Thanked........
so fucking good* u can really write.....
u could make a long fic with this chapter in it....
I got uncontrollably Qrious of that hole cave thing , and what they did there *smut*/what he said to her/everything , u could elaborate so much on this*!!!!
And this eyelash -thingy, sooo fantastically original....and beautiful...
you just complement the characters and capture spike as only few can... and you sem to understand buffys emotional problems as well,
and u capture spikes manarisms and his mind/language in a really evolving way......(youll be perfect soon)
the chapter was simple enough and nothing extremely original,
but your writing just got to me in a way that fanfic just doesnt get to me usually anymore.
Dont now what it is with your writing but you must continue*
DONT PICK IN THIS CHAPTER TO MUCH , COSE ITS SIMPLE AND GREAT ....MAYBE JUST THE LAST LINES....(A LITTLE)
U got the talent to write a long fic without going dry of good material , The Imagination to...
So do that, use Thanked and the hole cave thing, and figure out a plot and make a really good one for all of us...
Therse really only a simple few here hwo can write at all , an u seem able*
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February 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sorry i saw that the capter Thanked had been put in this fic by mistake , im glad ure
writing a long fic *lol*
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writing a long fic *lol*
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February 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aargh! I made a mistake and uploaded the last chapter of "Lucky Number" to this one chapter story. Sorry for what must have been very confusing to everyone :-((
I've deleted it now. Go read Lucky Number to see how they ended up like that; the eyelashes bit makes way more sense and chapter two is the really steamy one
I've deleted it now. Go read Lucky Number to see how they ended up like that; the eyelashes bit makes way more sense and chapter two is the really steamy one