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for Make Your Move

by kittendp

person Anon
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU SHOULD HAVE BEEN A LIL MORE DETAILED
person Mr.G
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice so nice you should write more yea write more!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please state in the summary when a story is a PWP. Thanks.
Oh, and description is usually a good thing. Try adjectives and explanations and whatnot. They're a writer's friend.