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for A Promise Kept

by charmed1k

person Anon
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...Anya didn't make it. You should fix that. You refer to her in the first chappy as being alive.
person tcjmfan
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this twist on the story. Can't wait to read more
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet. And I want more, please!
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Anya makes it in this version? Well, she'll probably do good with Andrew and Dawn keeping people company. This is good so far!
person Val.-
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i liked your chappy, i really did, but there are some things i'd like to tell you; for example, about Buffy's behavior: she's like a child in this fic, the real Buffy would be more mature, (even if she had tell him that she loved him or if she had knew he was going to die...). Spike's really great, maybe the tears are something too sensible for him... But Buffy... i don't know... she's like a little kid, too weak. I know she's afraid of Spike's death, but... i don't know... K :) I liked the chappy. :P
person Val.-
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, liked your chappy, but there was no "OH MY GOD" or something like that when Buffy saw him? i think there's a lack of emotion... but it's good...
person Anga
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, it's very sweet. As for the next chapter, I'm at a loss. I don't write for a reason, I have no ideas. But if you write more, I'll read it.