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February 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! (woohoo!) This is so sick! (woohoo!) I can't believe you had Angelus rape, beat AND crucify the serial killer/rapist Spike (woohoo!). I mean, talk about overkill (woohoo!). In case you haven't guessed it yet, I'm not saying I'm SORRY you did it. In fact, if I weren't sitting at my work desk, I'd be dancing a jig. You must realize, however, the the Spuffys are going to flame you for this, so I thought I'd let you know...good for you! Numfar, do the Dance of Joy!
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January 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good. I like the way you've worked in the drudgery of Buffy's daily life between School, DMP, and the slaying, as well as her difficulties ahndling and providing for the SiT's. It provides a really nice backdrop for whatever she's about to experience with Angelus. And it goes a little further to explain how she's been acting than BtVS has done, IMHO.
I wish you'd played Angelus a little more enigmatic with the AI crew - I think it's cool that he taunted Cordy, but I do kind of wish I seen a little more of him reacting to Wesley and Connor before he took off - and I do wish he'd done a little less to clue them in that he would go to Sunnydale. Now someone's going to have to warn Buffy, and it will take away too much of the shock if Buffy, Spike, and folks knoout out Angelus before he pops up.
That said, I really like where you are going with this. Angelus appears to be picking up where he left off from the last time he appeared... Cool.
I wish you'd played Angelus a little more enigmatic with the AI crew - I think it's cool that he taunted Cordy, but I do kind of wish I seen a little more of him reacting to Wesley and Connor before he took off - and I do wish he'd done a little less to clue them in that he would go to Sunnydale. Now someone's going to have to warn Buffy, and it will take away too much of the shock if Buffy, Spike, and folks knoout out Angelus before he pops up.
That said, I really like where you are going with this. Angelus appears to be picking up where he left off from the last time he appeared... Cool.
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January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sounds pretty interesting. Nice twist on "Awakening." I don't buy that A/C stuff myself. Well, looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 So loving Buffy could change even a soulless beast? Well, that's what Noxious N wan wanted us to believe but she gave us the wrong vampire. Put Cordy and Spike in their place, DR. It's B/A all the way. Maybe Willow can bring him his soul back--that is, if the idiots at A.I. realize where exactly Angelus has gone. How could they not after the massive clue he gave them?