rate_review Reviews

Um... okay i like the story a lot it's really cute and all, but i think you got some of the chapters mixed up. Chapter six is like a totally different plot line that says it's chapter four for some story named Saved. don't worry i've done this before so it's no big deal. just thought you should know that that's what happened. i'm going to read chapter seven because it's the right story and hopefully i'll understand it without chapter six. just fix that and everything will be fine. anyway not to sound flamey or anything because i think your story is really cute and i like it. Update soon

I like it and i want to hear more about the mpreg....
I love Spike in this story it sheds a whole new light on him..
Sorry so short
Please update real soon i'm waitting.

Love, Ray