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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, please, you can't end it this way!
I want more!!! I wanna see them make up... I wanna see Buffy send Angel to hell (figuratively speaking).. and I want an happy ending!!!
Write the sequel, please!! :)
I want more!!! I wanna see them make up... I wanna see Buffy send Angel to hell (figuratively speaking).. and I want an happy ending!!!
Write the sequel, please!! :)
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO, no more please more, make it better, this is such a good story but please more, *whimper* please
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is that it? Where's the rest?? You can't just leave me hanging like that!!!!!!! Please continue this.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I WANT A SEQUEL AND A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COME ON, PRETTY PLEASE? I NEED IT !!!!!
I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I really hope you do a sequel. maybe with a happier ending. Or at least let us see angel get what's coming to him.(bad things) Losing his wife to his little brother. I only have one suggestion and please don't take it as a flame. the grammar and spelling was really bad. maybe have a beta reader check it before post it. keep up the great work.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, don't you dare living it with nquelquel...I mean, pretty please?!!? :-(
I would love to see maybe Buffy pregnant and the baby having big blue eyes ;-)
I'll look forward to a sequel :P
Love,
messy
I would love to see maybe Buffy pregnant and the baby having big blue eyes ;-)
I'll look forward to a sequel :P
Love,
messy
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is there better be a sequal with an ending like that!!!!!! I'm dying to know what happens next! :o)
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you should very much continue with this story!! Please!?!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise for a story adn I think a sequel would work well. My advice before you write that? Get a beta, someone to look over your work and help you out with spelling, grammar, and consistency. And also, please work on characterization, especially in dialogue. Especially in Spike's dialogue.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story idea is a good one, but you need a beta. you need to proof read your material before posting. there were numerious errors in both grammer & spelling. there are many people out there willing to beta stories. i suggest that you find one before post a sequel or another chapter. don't give up. writing takes practice to get it just right. i took me a while before i got the hang of it. your storyline has plenty of room to grow into a very steamy story.