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by SlayersGift

person Ally
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start :) I'm really interested to read more. I like Buffy in this fic, she's so... perky =)
person Cin
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*chants* touch the goodies! touch the goodies! touch the goodies! touch the goodies!

i love your story. for a 1st it's way amazing. you got writing talent in you blood... use it! please update soon. i can't wait. it's an amazing portrail of the characters in an AU setting. me likey!
person AnneLiz
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue it!
I like these two, they've got probl but but they'll solve them together, I'm sure!

**AnneLiz-Alexandra**
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I love it, Dying for more
person willowmouse
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has potential ... you said its your 1st fic, good start .... Looking forward to reading more of this
person slackerace
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your first fic? Wow. You are off to a great start. Looking forward to more!
person sluggie
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey October! I see you finally decided to follow in your mother's footsteps. I enjoyed the first chapter. I liked Buffy's assertiveness and the witty banter between them as they drove and got to his house. Nice start and setup. Looking forward to finding out where you go with this. :-)
person alicia
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it! They are so cute with the teasing. Please update soon :-)
person Donna
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like it.
person Kar
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH. I saw this on your LJ. Yipee! Looks good, keep going. Seems orgino meo me & so much potential to be smutty. I wonder what the tragedy is. Will Drusilla die & Spike have to take care of Mattie?? Or will something else happen. Oh, I'm so excited!