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by SlayersGift

person sluggie
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. Flashback scene with Spike and Fred was intense. Can't wait to see how Buffy and Matthew get along, however I have to point out that he can't possibly be the cutest or most adorable little boy out there cause my son already holds that honor...lol..;-)
person Azrielle6969
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhanger!! It was great...can't wait for the next chappie.
person Emma
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story. It's beautiful, and I almost cried. Could be PMS emotional crap, but I really like it and I hope you update soon!
person AnneLiz
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, keep on writing... I'm happy that they're back together.. but, his issue with alcohol?
I'm curious to see what Spike and Buffy's reaction will be to all these changes!
person lucky021
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story so far, I think you have a good handle on the characters and their emotions. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more!
person Kat
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... birth control didn't seem to be an issue this time around... poor spike, but gooke uke up scene. More please!!
person lolita
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was such a great chapter - and oh my gosh how could you just leave it there like that, that was so mean! :) I am truly getting inhis his and I hope that you can update it as soon as possible.
person Irissss
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey loving this story, I'm glad it's not all roses and sex and that there is a story behind the shagging.
person Celestria
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*SH!T*

I must say that was a depressing chapter! and I hope she does get pregnant! and Man, with him calling her a child, I felt that slap! Damn that was amazing I u update soon! SOON! NOW! that's a order!


~Celestria~ *kisses*
person sluggie
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie, LOVE the story. Last chappie was great. I like the realistic quality of all the crazy ass real life bullshit that people put each other through. It's not all roses and wine, ya know? Anyway...you're doing a fantastic job. Looking forward to many more chapters!