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by lucky021

person slackerace
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is like crack. I am so frigginitedited with each update.

God, poor William! Tara and Xander really fucked with him, didn't they? His friends hurt him as much as Dru. Seems all he's known is pain, yet he is so willing to give his heart away. I can't wait for more. I only hope that Buffy doesn't fuck him over, too, altho it doesn't seem as if she will, based upon how you are writing her...
person slackerace
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story.

Spike has opened himself up to Buffy so much. I'd like to hear her story. Know more about her relationship with her father and why she cannot tell Spike she loves him.
person samy
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is such a greate story! ie toe to admit, that icried after i read the 6th chapter.
i really want to know, what his dark sekrets are.
keep on writing and update soon!

samy
person Kimber
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES, YES YES>>>>>>finally....Spike will get the healing he needs.....no only Buffy's love but hopefully her understanding, open mindiness will help bring William back to life........let the past be that......the past.......learn from it, don't let it break you.....

continue, continue....


Kimber
person b
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is good. original take on the angel/spike/dru thing. i think you're doing a good job of making it dark enough to be vampire like. i'm definitely feeling for spike. he's so damned if he does damned if he doesn't when it comes to how he thinks about what he has gone through. i hope he finds peace with his past.
person October
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was so hesitant to read this story, and finally I read it just now and it totally sucked me in. I'm really, really liking this. Hope you update soon. :)

[Sorry, I'm not really good at leaving feedback, but I really like this. :)]

-October
person nip1
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved how your story is developing. Cannot wait to read more of how their relationship will go....
person kendall
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh Buffy, Buffy, Buffy. WHY does she like riley? lol update sooN!! :)
person Kimber
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, another great chapter.......but l..I ..I have to put up with Riley......grrrrgh......well maybe I will just skim that chapter......just post again when he is gone out of the together with Buffy picture......just incase I skim to fast and miss somthing.....LOL


Kimber
person Kendall
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is just getting better by the second!!!!! Please updsoonsoon!!! :)