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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i nearly wet my pants with joy when i saw you'd updated. fabulous chapter. fabulous story. i'm so happy she finally told him she loved him.
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fucking amazing story. fabulous plot, hot sex, true to character. and i never thought i could like spander, but this story makes it work. update frequently please!
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a g cha chapter. I love how you go from the present to the past and let us know everything that has happend to will. So far all we know about buffy is that she has a sister, her mother died, and her father basically abandoned her. Are we gonna get to find out more about her past, or is that about it for her. kep thp the great work and update soon. I love this story.
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this stroy is so amazing. you manage toe eve everything seem so real, without going overboard into a full-blown agnst fest, which a lot of authors do. its really well written and i love the way you write spike, you handle it really sensitively and i think you have the perfect balance with the whole insecure/bad boy thing.
if there's one criticism (and trust its not big - i really do love this story) its that you sometimes seem to get a bit preoccupied with telling us exactly what happened in spike's past, and although we obviously need to know a bit of that, it might be better at times if you just hinted at it and let us put the pieces together ourselves.
neways, cant waor tor the next update
katie_k
(hope i didnt insult you or piss you off at all bef:) ):) )
if there's one criticism (and trust its not big - i really do love this story) its that you sometimes seem to get a bit preoccupied with telling us exactly what happened in spike's past, and although we obviously need to know a bit of that, it might be better at times if you just hinted at it and let us put the pieces together ourselves.
neways, cant waor tor the next update
katie_k
(hope i didnt insult you or piss you off at all bef:) ):) )
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, I just love this story.
though Im pretty anxious about where this will end I don't want it to end ever :D
Keep goin! You're doin a great job!
though Im pretty anxious about where this will end I don't want it to end ever :D
Keep goin! You're doin a great job!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going! Like it so far... even if the suspense is killing me. Please update, pretty please?
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I started reading this story at Chapter 14 and am completely caught up!! this is a great story! please continue
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter as a whole but as for the whole Spander thing... well its interesting on some level
(to me anywayz) BUT I kinda feel that aspect could possibly hinder the whole Spuffy vibe. I mean
I get that they were best friends and have been there for each other and have fucked on another
on numerous occasions but having their friendship stay that way on any level and contining to
explore that... well I personally don't think Buffy would go with it for very long if at all... I know I
wouldn't. So I guess what I'm sayin' is lay off the Spanderness!
Okay so that's my two cents I hope it helped... and more soon!
(to me anywayz) BUT I kinda feel that aspect could possibly hinder the whole Spuffy vibe. I mean
I get that they were best friends and have been there for each other and have fucked on another
on numerous occasions but having their friendship stay that way on any level and contining to
explore that... well I personally don't think Buffy would go with it for very long if at all... I know I
wouldn't. So I guess what I'm sayin' is lay off the Spanderness!
Okay so that's my two cents I hope it helped... and more soon!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The scene w/ Spike and Xander's first time was really good! You really made me feel for William.
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!! MAY I HAVE SOME MORE PLEASE!