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Finally an update! Been waiting a while for this update and i must say it is quite good (some proper English in there for some reason :])! I also liked how u made their thoughts parallel on that night and all the close calls between them. All this is making me want to read more! Hurry and post, i need more! :)

What a dellightful and bittersweet chapter ! I love absolutely your story , and how you 're torturing us in this part with Buffy running after e , e , and him trying to escape this powerful slayer !! It was lovingly done , as usual , and your voices's characters are always so perfect.. So much poignancy when Buffy and Spike are thinking to each other , at the same time, longing for the other's presence in their life.. And now i'm waiting for Spike to rescue his beloved . More !

more please.

Another excellent story! I love the premise and I think you are doing a great job of slowly bringing them together. You achieved just the right amount of creepiness for Argonia and just the right amount of emotional wretchedness for Vassilious (who sounds like another 'emotional' vampire like Spike.) I am so looking forward to the reunion, knowing that you're going to make this be challenging and exciting. Thanks!

LOL

I love that you have brought Cleveland into the mix....nothing like reading about where I live.....Just a FYI....Cleveland State University......no University of Cleveland exists.....there is Cuyahoga Community Colleges other wise known as Tri C (becausethe the three campus') and a few others....Also Case Western Reserve....Not sure if Valley View would be a nice place.....(just kidding....I'm a Cleveland girl...have to raze the suburbs....)

If you want or need more Cleveland highlights let me know....be more then happy to oblige ya. Great story so far and I have only read the first 3 chapters...

Kimber

Your story is going beautifully ! Your descriptive style is just brilliant , and the presence of this new vampiress is exciting , and troubling . I felt for Spike , so lonely in his battle , thinking that Buffy is in L.A.. And I look forward to their reunion ! It will be so satisfying to see them fighting and bantering again , side by side . I beg you for the next chapter : post it as soon as you can !

love everything you write. Like an artist with a brush you fill the canvas with a multitude of colors, and details that are so lacking in others work. I like the way the plot is developing.

Please continue. I really like your story.

I love it! update soon!

I love it! update soon!