rate_review Reviews

What!! Where did they go? (looks behind laptop.....) Doh! It was just getting hot. Loved this chapter. At last, they're both saying what them actually mean and I can't wait for the next instalment. More soon please oere'ere'll be no snoopy dancing in your honor ::sulks::

So good, can?t wait ?till I get a chance to read more of it. Only one thing though. When are you going to stop all these misunderstandings between Spike and Xander? It sort of seems that everytime they begin to understand one another something happens to confuse them (make them miserable) again. I realize that it?s part of the plot and all but I?m just one of those people that likes happy endings, or middles or... Well, whatever really:) Anyway, love the story. I?ll remember to check for updates. Sex soon? Please... lol

No you can't leave it like that. It was just getting exciting. More soon please.

Great! You just brightened my whole day. More Please!

found this story today, and read it all in one go. i love it .please update soon, and pleeeeease let it have a happy ending. they deserve one.

Hi
Okey where to start. God, I've been reading this series since you started it and it is honestly one of the best out there. I think it is mainly because of the good characterisation, but you also are a very good writer! the whole story is very real and believable. I've been following this for so long, I thought it was time to review!Keep up up the good work and good luck with the rest!

Hi Druffine,

great as ever!
Carry on girl!
:-)

The story could stand a bit of polishing but, all in all, a good job

Awww.... that was so sad! Poor Spike! I lubs Spike. He needs nummy Xander hugs, please? Please w mor more!

Oh! I'm soooo glad you updated! *facesplitting grin* I absolutely adore your writing hon. I've been reading this for months. Even b4 I got a live journal. Imagine my utter delight, when I saw that you not only had a LJ, but you also update your fiction there! I hadn't read "The still un-named series" for several weeks. Then I came across ch. 23-24 in your LJ. I was so psyched! Anyways, today I was looking through my desktop and saw the aff.net icon. I clicked it 'cuz I couldn't remember what I had saved there. That's when I saw that ch. 25 was up *smiles* I just wanted you to know that I loour our stuff, and the language is just perfect. I've read your questions about that, and there is nothing wrong w/ the way you write. Who ever told you that it got in the way of the story? Can Piss Off! *hugs Druffine while sticking tounge out at the mean nit picker* I've read lot's of fiction w/ errors that DO take away from the story. Things so glaringly obvious, that you just want to reach through the screen and edit yourself. So I wouldn't lie to ya, if yours was like that. If it was? I wouldn't reveiw at all. You have totally captured the way Xander thinks, speaks, and feels. And putting Spike in an element where he can be the Master Vamp he is? Always gives me a warm fuzzy, 'cuz Spike deserves respect! You give him that. Also the original characters and their languages and descriptions, are real good. Sometimes you run into authors who take that waaaayy over the top. Or they make them too human, never identify their demon nature, you know?
In conclusion *looks sheepisht tht the too long paragraph of babbling*, I just wanted to say: MORE! MORE! MORE!MORE!..NOW! NOW! NOW! NOW!..................*sends you xander puppy dog eyes*............Please?